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[關(guān)鍵詞]論文英文摘要2、原文：
ContentDeterminationofEmodininQingreMingmuCapsules
LUOMing-zhu1,ZHANGHong2(1.HubeiProviceInstituteofDrugControl,
Wuhan430030,China;2.The75310MedicalTeamoftheArmy)
ABSTRACTObjectives:TodeterminationcontentofEmodininQingreMingm
uCapsules.Methods:Tlcswasused,silicagelTlcplate,developingso
lventwasBenzene-Ethylfermate-formicacid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1
:0.5)ofwhichtheuppersolutionλS=435nm,λR=530nm.Result:Thelinea
rrelationshipofsampleapplicationwhichrangedbetween0.168-3.09μg
wasgood.Theregressionequationwasbelow:Y=105417.7X-1115.6,r=0.9
995;areragerecoverywas100.53%,RSD=3.38%.Conclusion:Thismethodi
ssimple,accurateandconvenient.
KEYWORDSTLcs;QingremingmuCcapsules;Emodin
修正：
DeterminationofEmodinContentinQingremingmu1Capsules
LUOMing-zhu1,ZHANGHong2(1.HubeiProvicialInstituteofDrugControl
,Wuhan430030,China;2.The75310MedicalTeamoftheArmy)
ABSTRACTObjective:Tosetupamethodforthedetermination（content刪
去）ofEmodincontentinQingreMingmuCapsules.Methods:IntheTLCa
ssay,a0.5%canboxymethylcellulosesodium(wasused刪去)silicagelG
plateandadevelopingsolventwithamixtureofbenzene—ethylformat
e—formicacid—methanol—water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5)astheuppersolution
wereused.λS=435nm,λR=530nm.Results:Agoodlinearrelationshipwas
foundwhenthesampleamount(which刪去)rangedbetween0.168-3.09μg
（wasgood刪去）.Theregressionequationwasasfollows:Y=105417.7X-1
115.6,r=0.9995.Theaveragerateofrecoverywas100.53%,RSD=3.38%.Co
nclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandaccurate.
KEYWORDSTLC;QingreMingmuCcapsules;Emodin
點(diǎn)評(píng)：
1、中成藥名用斜體書(shū)寫(xiě)，也可譯作removingpathogenicheattoimproveacui
tyofvision。
3、原文：
ResearchonTheAcuteToxicityofHuningCapsule
XINZhi-wei,ZANGZhi-he,MAIXiao-xia,FENGJun,YANGWan-qing,LIAOH
ong-li(TeachingandResearchSectionofPharmacy,TheThirdMedicalUn
iversity,ChengduCollegeofPLA610081,China)
ABSTRACTObjective:ToobserveandtesttheacutetoxicityofHuningCa
psuleonKunmingmiceafterani.g.Methods:Countthedeathcasesofm
icein7daysafterthei.g.andworkouttheLD50ofHuningCapsule.R
esults:TheLD50ofHuningCapsuleonmiceis3981mg/kg.
KEYWORDSHuningCapsule;AcuteToxicity;LD50
修正：
AnExperimentalStudyoftheAcuteToxicityofHuningCapsules1
XINZhi-wei,ZANGZhi-he,MAIXiao-xia,FENGJun,YANGWan-qing,LIAOH
ong-li(TeachingandResearchSectionofPharmacy,ChengduMilitaryMed
icalCollege,TheThirdMilitaryMedicalUniversity,Chengdu610081,Ch
ina)
ABSTRACTObjective:ToobserveanddeterminetheacutetoxicityofHuni
ngcapsules(onKunmingmice刪去)afterasingleintragastricadministr
ationinthemouse.Methods:50Kunmingmicewererandomlydividedinto
5equalgroups,with10animalsineachgroup.Asingledoseof7500,
5630,4200,3150and2360mg/kg-1ofthecontentofthecapsulesweread
ministenedthroughagastrictubetoeachofthemiceofthe5groups,
respectively.Thenumbersofthedeathsofthemicewithin7dayswere
noteddownandthemediarletherdose(LD50)ofHuningCapsuleswascal
culated.(Countthedeathcasesofmicein7daysafterthei.g.andwo
rkouttheLD50ofHuningCapsule.刪去)Results:TheLD50ofHuningCa
psuleinmicewas3981mg/kg.Conclusion:HuningCapsuleshaveonlyami
noracutetoxicity.Itisthereforesafetousethedrugclinically.Fu
rtherstudyofitstoxicityinlong-termapplicationisrequired.
KEYWORDSHuningCapsules;Toxicity,acute;LD50
點(diǎn)評(píng)：
1、“呼寧膠囊”也可譯作antitussiveandantiasthmaticcapsules.
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